I hate you right now Static

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UGH can you guys believe that the scene where Static and Sandy meet has gone through SO MANY REWRITES that every possible cliche stowed in my brain has been attempted?!

I was checking out the script once more and saw that I still have chunks of missing dialogue in that section, or lines that don’t really match up because they’ve gone undeleted from old revisions.

Normally that doesn’t bother me. I already know what I want to draw and usually when it’s in front of me, I can “ad-lib” the lines. But not for this part.

I don’t know how to write lecherous jackasses very well. I don’t really expose myself to a lot of media with them. I remember going through a crappy dating sim binge for research once. I’m really sad I did that. I will live with the shame for the rest of my life.

Maybe you guys are (or know) better writers than me. Surely, my AGENCY Static has displayed enough of his train of thought to give you an idea of what he wants with Sandy. GUYS. Can you, like… inspire me or point me in the right direction? I know I don't usually ask stuff like this, but my brain is a raisin right now after this long, difficult week. I need to creatively rehydrate and maybe your inspiration might boost the process along.

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Crysenley's avatar
If you're still needing help with this...
Hmm... This is a hard one. Dating sims was a good idea in theory, but most of them are so cheesy and unrealistic. >.>

Ok, Imma name every jerk who makes bold advances off the top of my head:
-Paulo from a comic called Bittersweet Candy Bowl is the first to pop up in my head. He's not that bad, my fav character in fact, but he can be a jerky perv. He's probably too young to help you, though.
-That guy from the movie Ted! Complete jerk who keeps making advances on his colleague, the main character's girlfriend.
-Ted, too, actually in a way.
-Pretty much any movie with two guys going for the same girl, like Beauty and the Beast, I guess.
-Actually, correction, any move with an average or below looking guy/nerd/loser trying to get the girl.
-I think, the movie The Invention of Lying, or something like that had a jerk who was garnering for the protagonist's love interest. That example may not help because the movie has a recurring joke of what people would say if there was no impulse to lie or hide true feelings.
Asked my brother:
-Love Guru
-A Batman movie. "The first one" to which he's not sure which one.

Ugh, I know there's more, but I can't think of any! Type in Google "how to get a girl/how to get a girl to sleep with you/how to get a girl to fall in love with you" or something else like that. I've seen articles like this before, where the author is a complete jerk giving advice on how to get with a girl or whatever. X'D That might help some.
Hope this all helps. :D I absolutely love Static, as terrible as he is, lol.