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AGENCY DAY 3: Act II pg35 by JediAnnSolo AGENCY DAY 3: Act II pg35 by JediAnnSolo
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[Start reading from the beginning]

I cut out a LOT of stuff from this sequence. Back when I had a bigger interest in portraying AWKWARD MOMENTS rather than story. I am tempted to post the entire scripted scene as a one-shot story here. Maybe I will-- not sure yet.

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:iconcuddlelover:
CuddleLover Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Artist
Shadow is so qute in this comic X3
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Vulpixkat Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Shadow is a very good shopper. He stays in the store. 
Many men just sorta phase outside like an barrier got set up and they have no choice but to leave. XD

I dunno. With Sandy, less is more. She doesn't need the frou-frou, just a nice little dress with a flowery pin in her hair, light make up, she's good to go. 
This is torture for the poor dear ^^;
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You know, I realized as I read your comment how very true it is that a man who stay in the vicinity is rare enough on its own.

Then again, he's being paid to hang around her...
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:iconvulpixkat:
Vulpixkat Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
XD
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:iconredrose-melody:
redrose-melody Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
I'd love to see the script!!!
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's a fun, but needlessly long sequence. And not like crazy long, just long enough that I realize it all shouldn't really matter at the end. The point of the shopping sequence is to get Sandy something nice to wear for Act 3 and to delve into how Krystal copes with stress.
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:iconredrose-melody:
redrose-melody Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
Okay ^^

I admit it would be long to draw!
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:iconiwhitefox:
iwhitefox Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
give her the spacesuit :p
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heck yes.
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:icontilemaxosbra:
tilemaxosbra Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sandy is like a skinny bear that hates people. Dummy.
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:iconshojoboy1024:
shojoboy1024 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student
I feel so bad for Sandy ^^
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:iconlilriss157:
lilriss157 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Quick questions, is Shadow going to Krystal's party? If he is then where's HIS outfit? XD
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mei will make sure he's well-dressed. :)
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:iconlilriss157:
lilriss157 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good xD
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:icontilemaxosbra:
tilemaxosbra Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He will be naked. Anything for da ladiez.
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:iconlilriss157:
lilriss157 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconlildash:
LilDash Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
poor Sandy XD
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:iconloopy-lass:
Loopy-Lass Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
"She looks like a cake." Bwahahaha love it xD
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, it's called the cake dress, after all!
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:iconscribble-mouse:
Scribble-Mouse Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Those dresses... I know them! They're from Animal Crossing right? I love this!

Shadow's reactions are the best! :happybounce: 
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They are! Glad you noticed!
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:iconshadobabe:
ShadOBabe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*snicker* I like how Shadow kinda shies away, like something creepy plopped in his lap. XDD
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, he doesn't really have the fondest of regards to her quite yet. :XD:
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ShadyWinters Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The dress on Sandy in the fourth panel actually looks good on her, from afar.
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautyfly dress is very pretty, but probably too showy or flashy for Sandy.
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:iconshadywinters:
ShadyWinters Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, she's a country girl. She'd need something more simple, yet elegant for her.
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LightsShadow03 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014   Writer
lol Sandy is like me I hate shopping it's boring unless it's games and comics and stuff lol

wonder what's the problem with Gracie

nice work :)
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gracie's such a horrible poop, I didn't even want her in my comic. :XD: So Labelle is here as her spokesperson.

And thanks!
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:iconlightsshadow03:
LightsShadow03 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014   Writer
Haha cool
np :)
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:icondamushroom:
DaMushroom Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
 LOOK! ITS ME SHOE SHOPPING WITH MY SISTER
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And it's me shopping for any sort of wearable item!
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:iconashbasher22:
ashbasher22 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This story is getting more smarter as it is going along. :) Hope there is a epic battle at the end. :D
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope the end is epic, too...
It'll all be up to the readers' opinion. :)
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ashbasher22 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Static helps Fox and R.O.B escape after he finds out that it was Wolf doing the unspeakable actions, the female boss dog is just a hench-collie working for him, they escape, Falco joins Marcus and the other kid and keeps them safe, Krystal sneaks into the building, only to be captured by Wolf and the other members of the Agency Mob (even though she puts up a strong effort of a fight) sealing her in a Magic-proof barrier. Fox, Static and the others plan to proof the evidence on Wolf, the plan succeed in the cleverest way, it leads up to a epic fight between Fox, Marcus and the others against Wolf and the mob, it is fast paced, strong and emotional battle and Krystal is freed during the battle, beginning till the end, awesome action and a satisfying but heart felt victory against their enemies (not killing any of them except maybe either Static or Shadow sacrifices his life by taking himself with wolf off a ledge to a electric/magnetic field, shocking both to death) the ending should be Fox, Marcus and Krystal reunited in a heartwarming and satisfying way, the others going ahead with their own lives, the agency mob gets arrested and it all ends with Fox and the others individually look in the sky and see their sacrificed ally and show appreciation and thanks in a non talking way.

What do you think of that? 
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HOLY CRAP, DUDE! :wow: That sounds so much more awesome than my ending! I'm kinda jealous. Are you writing a story, too?

I mean, don't get me wrong, I really like the ending I made (and there are a two certain things you described that are SCARY SIMILAR to my ending but I can't tell you what they are, spoilers!), but I'm just hoping that people like it, too. I think my ending is something that many won't expect, but I'm crossing my fingers that I pull it off epicness.
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ashbasher22 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That means a lot, I like to think with my imagination and also keeping the personalities of the characters likeable. :D I might plan a show where a female video game player goes into the video game world, she progressively gets three months training, she obtains allies and Fox and Falco are two of them, I think I might do 12 allies (others include Sly Cooper, Simon Belmont, Jon Tolbain, Crash Bandicoot etc. :D P.S. Action is awesome if done right. ;3
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Osmostrix Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Hmm. She does look rather cake-like in that panel! I think I prefer the service of the Able Sisters in this situation. Even Sable was more hospitable to guests than this girl.Dance! 
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, it is called the cake dress for a reason. But yeah, the Able Sisters even sell cosplay. They're much funner people.
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:iconthestaticstalker:
TheStaticStalker Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You wrote "you" twice by accident in Panel 8.

BTW, awesome Labelle.
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, dude. It'll be fixed tomorrow.
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:iconthestaticstalker:
TheStaticStalker Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! ^ω^
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saints-fan-12 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014   Writer
I can't do anything but laugh on the inside. But I think it'll end sooner if they find something, well end sooner for Sandy. The one-shot would be amazing, go for it if you want.
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sandy would be okay with buying any of them (because it would be the end of that), but Krystal is probably not satisfied with her looks.
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saints-fan-12 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014   Writer
Makes sense, sort of taking in her stature and build (if it changed).
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:icona-rod48:
a-rod48 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Labelle is a jerk! Oh well, what are you going to do about those fashion types.....
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Labelle is ever loyal to her boss' boutique. Don't shoot the messenger! Though it is pretty messed up either way.
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Dogman15 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
1 vote for you to "post the entire scripted scene as a one-shot story."
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:iconjediannsolo:
JediAnnSolo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That'll be fun. Just need to adjust some wording.
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Dogman15 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
Wait, was I the only one who voted?
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